My bus stop is next to a local park, which is mainly sand and gravel, but with a number of climbing structures and see-saws that host both elementary-and-middle-school-aged children, depending on the time of day. It's across the street from an elementary school, which is full of children eager to learn English--and aren't afraid to trap a couple of foreigners for upwards of an hour with questions and insisting that the two must be dating.
Children are certainly an important part of any neighborhood. Many students have written about children - or the lack of them - in neighborhood parks. You offer some brief physical descriptions of your neighborhood and then present the main theme of children. But you don't go into much detail. Why do you think children are important to investigate within this week's theme of neighborhood? How do your photos work to support this theme? (I do like your second photo.) Also, I am a little concerned about having pictures of children in these posts without their parent's permission.
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